Inspirational word 'Fresh' Mood Board & feedback (first attempt)

'Fresh'Mood Board 

First attempt.

This is my mood for my inspirational word, I gathered information and images that inspired me and made me think of fresh when seeing them. I love the cool colours mixed with the different textures.

I showed my mood board to my peers and gathered feedback in order for me to change certain things to improve it, they told me to not think so literal even though they liked the use of textures and images, to go beyond and further with it, to really think outside the box. I also was told to not include so much makeup on my board and concentrate on any images that make you think of 'Fresh' but with structure, so the photos aren't too random, in order to tell a story and collaborate your ideas on; in order for your inspirations to be seen clearly and understood. I will take this on board and will make some adaptations to my mood board.

Here is an image of my first attempt of 'Fresh' Mood Board